
Now I’m sure tons of you love rollercoaster’s, but not as much as me. Every time my mom says we’re going on holiday, I always say this: “We have to go to a theme park!”
Now my sister enjoys rides too, but I remember the first day I went on a rollercoaster (which was Kraken) and I went on the ride eight times before my sister! Yes… eight times. I was very mad at her for this, I don’t know why, but I just was, probably it was because she was older than me.
Ever since the day I went on Mr. Kraken, I have been so deeply in love with rollercoaster’s, and that’s the truth.
P.S: please tell me what your favorite ride is!
I love the P.S. to generate a real response!
ReplyDeleteWhen I was a teen, and I venture to say into my early 20's, I loved roller coasters as well. Growing up I couldn't wait for summer because that meant that we were about to embark upon our favorite place, Six Flags Great Adventures. I didn't care how long I had to stand in line as long as I rode the newest and scariest coaster in the park.
Thanks for evoking such good memories.
It was a very funny story. I like how you end the confession: "Ever since the day I went on Mr. Kraken, I have been so deeply in love with rollercoaster’s, and that’s the truth." hahaha it`s so funny.
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I don`t have a favorite one, but I love Kraken!
That was a nice confession. I liked how you told that you were mad at your sister, and that you said your very first ride. Haha well right now I don't have a favorite roller-coaster, even though I love them too. I think maybe if you also added how you felt during the ride and more details it could've been better. But was nice.
ReplyDeleteBumper cars!! :D nice story
ReplyDeleteFunny! I love roller coasters and the Kraken was the first one I've ever gone to. I was scared at first, but when the ride ended, I wanted to go again and again!
ReplyDeleteNice job on inner though! But you had some spelling mistakes ;)
ReplyDeleteKaty,check in your spam to see if the comment is there.
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