The speech last night that Obama gave out, was a speech given to help the citizens of America apprehend what was happening in the country. The President looked into everyone’s eyes, and tried to reassure them, that coalition was the start of a new beginning.
The shooting in Arizona on January 8th was a terrible moment, and that one member of state was wounded with a bullet shot into her head, but fortunatly, she survived. It was tragic that it happend to this paticular woman, just because she was mixed in with regular citizens in front of a supermarket. The people who did this, obviously would have conspired before attacking the state. I could see them in this dark room, arguing over who got to be a part of the killing, and who didn’t. I don’t understand why people would want to kill innocent people, and risk getting thrown into jail; It just doesn’t seem right, and I believe that this should be dealt with. I feel like the presidents always want the government to be in good shape, due to the fact that at the beginning of time, the U.S. was in a state of anarchy, no one was ruling until our first president rose to the surface and the start of a new beginning was born.
I love how you added your own thought to it!! You may want to add more detail though. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI really liked how you thought about this situation and I also agreed with you when you said " I don’t understand why people would want to kill innocent people, and risk getting thrown into jail".
ReplyDeleteWOW! I loved your story, it sound so professional!
ReplyDeleteYou did a very good job and the use of the words were correct (I think, haha)
I really enjoy reading your stories, keep on doing them so interensting!!:)
Good story, nice use of WW words and i like how u mixed the words something that actually happened.
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