On March 11th, 2011, a massive earthquake with a high magnitude of 8.9, hit the north eastern part of Japan. The sound of it happening was audible to anyone that was close by, and suddenly made everyone worried and feel a pang of fright. Reporters have announced a copious amount of deaths and injuries, and have made it crucial for everyone to look and help all the other people caught in the attack.
Japan tried to deploy as many countries like the U.S, the U.K, and China to come and help out. They wanted to facilitate the job, making it easier for everyone that was helping, but they knew it would not be like that.
With all the disaster that has struck, Japan would probably want adept people that could really help out and make a difference.
With so many people running and trying to get away, buildings were needed to be capacious in order to hold many survivors.
Apart from the earthquake, a terrible tsunami hit 15 minutes after the earthquake. Due to how fast tsunamis travel, everyone was just hoping it could possibly decelerate; therefore, giving them more time to reach safety.
But everyone must still have hope, they should look up at the azure of the beautiful sky upon them, and let the shimmering light from the gleaming sun brighten up their day.
Great story Katy:)
ReplyDeleteIt is a really good report and you used the words very good!!
Keep the good jod on:)
Very nice, clearly tells me the events that happened. It seems exactly like a post on CNN or other news site, very well done.
ReplyDeleteHaha good job Katy! I really liked how you used the words and all about how you added in the words. I think that it is really nice how all the countries are helping out, don't you think? :) nice job.
ReplyDeleteOh my god!!!! That was AWESOME!!!! You used great detail and facts to make your report more accurate!!!!! Keep up the GREAT work! :)
ReplyDeleteGreat job describing the event Katy. But i think the word "deploy" was used incorrectly. I might be wrong though
ReplyDeleteGreat article, i think is might need a little mo information though, but i like itt.
ReplyDeleteGreat story Katy! Al the words were used correctly, but im not sure if deploy was used right. You had great information and it was very clear :)
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone, i'll fix deploy. Thanks for all your comments.:)
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